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TLR WARS : Episode 1 A new dark lord Pt2

Tell us about your adventures, amazing stories, wow us with your wit...use your imagination, tell us some of the greatest moments in your life.

Post Wed Oct 13, 2004 6:57 pm

Nice going FD!
I love reading this story!

Post Thu Oct 14, 2004 8:46 am


I hate waiting for big surprises. Post the next bit quickly!

Post Thu Oct 14, 2004 5:10 pm

Admiral Bargib and Commander Spix were conferring over the current situation. They both decided it would be a good idea to have the fighter support in space when the fleet dropped out of hyper space. That way, they could engage the enemy fighters quickly, taking an element of surprise. Arania would head up the assault wings and relay all orders to the wings as needed. Bargib was still doubtful of success of this battle. A lot hinged on the bluff they had to pull off. The Death Star would still have to be dealt with, but, this battle was a diversion as well. A smaller, more powerful fleet was headed to Yavin and the shipyards. They had to destroy it at all costs.

Darkstone had spent the last two hours going over detail after detail of his encounter with the Sith Lord. He explained the reason for the video as it was to draw out the Sith Master in hopes of ending the conflict. Then, he produced a piece of evidence that he had left out of his report. A communication message to the student, but from someone else other than Darth sycho_warrior. It was a male voice, one that no one remembered ever hearing before. All that was on it were the words, Continue with the plan, I will send your Master to you soon. Someone who would be over a Master, would be even a greater threat.

Darkstone saw the incredulous looks on the others. There were many here that doubted the existence of the sith, but thought it was just a rouge Jedi. Now, though, they were confronted with the reality of the situation. They had to face the reality, that this would be a more difficult fight than anticipated. This, was a fight for their very survival.

The Dark Master, waited in her chambers, waited till she could have her revenge, waited, until she could face her enemy. This one, she knew, but how? Her memory of being a Jedi was there, just buried. She had only gained the memory of her parents through the help of another, one strong in the darkside of the force. She knew what he expected, she would not let him down. But first things first, revenge on the planet that started it all. She stood, facing the star mass. She closed her eyes, meditating on the power she drew from the dark side, focusing it, focusing on it. She felt herself lighter than air. “My Lord, we will be dropping out of Hyper space in five minuets” Came Commander Indy’s voice.

She readied herself and headed for the bridge. She would give the order to fire herself. Then, what was left would be mopped up by the fleet. They would be reduced to rubble before her. Then, she would leave orbit in the Death Star to the world that housed the Jedi council. That course had already been laid in. They would all be defeated, in a single day...........!

To Be Continued

Stay tuned for-
TLR Wars: Episode Two - The Fall of the Jedi

Edited by - Finalday on 10/14/2004 7:03:58 PM

Post Thu Oct 14, 2004 5:10 pm

Cast and Credits

Staring in Alphabetical order -

Arania - Republic Squadron Commander
Arcon - Supreme Chancellor
Bargib - Admiral of Republic Fleet
Chips - Jedi Master
DarkStone - Jedi Knight and Son of Luke Skywalker
Dark_Reaper - Star Destroyer Captain
DSQrn - New Imperial Flagship Captain
Esquilax - Jedi Master
freighter fighter - Commander of New Research
Gowserchris - Jedi Master and brother of Gowserpaul, co-head of Jedi Council
Gowserpaul - Jedi Master and brother of Gowserchris, co-head of Jedi Council
Indy11 - Commander of the New Death Star
Jagged - Captain of the flag ship, a Super Star Destroyer
KimK - Commander of Home One
Locutus - Smuggler and friend of Han Solo, Captain of The Star Princess
Lt Cmdr Ajim - Wing commander, Home two
Major Striker - Commander of ground troops
Mustang - Bounty Hunter and cloner source
Neo_Kuja - A new Dark Student
Redstar - Redstar one, A republic Squadron Commander
Richardson - Captain of Replublic Bulwark Battle crusier
Spix - Home Two Mon Calamari Cruiser Commander
Stinger - Jedi Master
sycho_warrior - The New Dark Master and Imperial Commander
Tawakalna -admiral of the New Imperial fleet
Topher - Republic Squadron Commander
Wen Shin - Queen of Naboo
Wizard - Jedi Master

Special Thanks to-
George Lucas for giving us Star Wars
TLR for having a great bunch of people
And a thanks to all who star in the story for letting me enjoy writting.

Edited by - Finalday on 11/9/2004 3:00:56 PM

Post Fri Oct 15, 2004 12:28 am

Hey unfair why did you end it here?
Very good, I can't wait to read the rest

Post Fri Oct 15, 2004 2:38 am

I was trying to create a "Clifhanger" for it. The stoy will continue in the 2nd Episode.

Post Fri Oct 15, 2004 5:32 am


Post Fri Oct 15, 2004 6:52 am

When can we expect this next episode? Soon, I hope

*ignites lightsaber for persuasion*

Post Fri Oct 15, 2004 8:49 am

* As a dark mist spreads across the floor, the ominus word is heard....Soon!* I am type checking the first one which ended at 40 pages.

Post Fri Oct 15, 2004 1:20 pm

brilliant as usual final looking forward to part 2

Post Fri Oct 15, 2004 2:59 pm

Yep, pt 2 will be awesome!
I wonder who he will have win, the good guys, or the bad guys?
Interesting to think about...

Post Fri Oct 15, 2004 4:52 pm

Shoot, I don't even get to say "fire." That sw's taking away all the fun.

Post Fri Oct 15, 2004 5:30 pm

oh so-so-so-so (i could go on or a long time) -so-so gooooooood (put me in the next one )

Post Fri Oct 15, 2004 11:32 pm

Sorry indy...but ehm...didnt you try to betray me earlier?

@Fd, why was sw given away to Skywalker? or is it in the story and I missed it?

Post Sat Oct 16, 2004 6:25 am

It will be revealed in the next story. Only a tiny aspect was used in this first story. It will have an effect on the plot in the next one.

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